2 haikus from laos
The deathride I took last Sunday ((The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly)), the beautiful emerald green ricefields, the laid-back people, and the fact that it's rained everyday this past week has put me in a reflective mood here in the wonderful country of Laos. Here are two haikus for a rainy day in the Laotian countryside.
An Ode to My Once Caked-on Muddy Shoes
washed you four days past
and still you are soaking wet
will you ever dry?
An Open Heart Letter to the Sun
will you please come out?
i need you to dry my shoes
stubbed my toe twice - ouch!
posted by ::rentastic:: @ 3:36 AM
6 comments
6 Comments:
Haikus are always the way to go. Keep up the good work! I have been absent from reading your blog as of late due to Busy and Important life, but shall remedy soon. Keep on keepin' on.
I like your haikus
bet you miss Argentine drought
good luck getting dry
shoes finally dry
now just incredible heat
wake up, sweat, sleep, sweat
northern Argentine
mountains very cool right now
heading north to tropics
your last sentence had
way too many syllables
haiku gods angry
haiku consists of
5-7-5 syllables
not more than or less
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